Comments on: The Visitor https://ashleylorelle.com/2011/10/14/the-visitor/ I live in a dream, and I haven't been lost yet. Wed, 19 Oct 2011 03:11:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Jo Eberhardt https://ashleylorelle.com/2011/10/14/the-visitor/#comment-745 Wed, 19 Oct 2011 03:11:04 +0000 https://ashleylorelle.com/?p=646#comment-745 Nice description. I really got a sense of the place. I hope you’re going to keep participating in Chuck’s flash fic challenges.

]]> By: Lindsay Mawson https://ashleylorelle.com/2011/10/14/the-visitor/#comment-744 Tue, 18 Oct 2011 22:34:16 +0000 https://ashleylorelle.com/?p=646#comment-744 That was quite the twist at the end! I enjoyed that while I was reading it, I felt like I was there, not like I was reading words and trying to pieces sentences together. It flows well. Liking this Lyris vampire, sounds like she’d be interesting to know!

]]> By: louisesor https://ashleylorelle.com/2011/10/14/the-visitor/#comment-741 Tue, 18 Oct 2011 15:21:03 +0000 https://ashleylorelle.com/?p=646#comment-741 Good story. I didn’t see the ending coming.
It sounds like an intriguing group!

]]> By: Josh Loomis https://ashleylorelle.com/2011/10/14/the-visitor/#comment-737 Mon, 17 Oct 2011 16:51:22 +0000 https://ashleylorelle.com/?p=646#comment-737 Very nice work. Looking forward to you participating in more of Chuck’s challenges.

]]> By: Melanie Kristy https://ashleylorelle.com/2011/10/14/the-visitor/#comment-736 Mon, 17 Oct 2011 13:50:17 +0000 https://ashleylorelle.com/?p=646#comment-736 Great flash fiction, Lorelle! I look foreward to reading more <3

]]> By: Ashley https://ashleylorelle.com/2011/10/14/the-visitor/#comment-727 Sat, 15 Oct 2011 11:51:32 +0000 https://ashleylorelle.com/?p=646#comment-727 Thank you! I kept asking myself what a girl who had been alive for one hundred and fifty years could do for a living…

]]> By: Darlene Underdahl https://ashleylorelle.com/2011/10/14/the-visitor/#comment-726 Sat, 15 Oct 2011 11:49:04 +0000 https://ashleylorelle.com/?p=646#comment-726 Taught history because she’d lived it. That was a good vampire story.

]]> By: Ashley https://ashleylorelle.com/2011/10/14/the-visitor/#comment-723 Sat, 15 Oct 2011 02:21:03 +0000 https://ashleylorelle.com/?p=646#comment-723 Thank you for reading!

]]> By: saraheolson https://ashleylorelle.com/2011/10/14/the-visitor/#comment-722 Fri, 14 Oct 2011 20:58:18 +0000 https://ashleylorelle.com/?p=646#comment-722 Nice descriptions and sense of place.

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